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Using the methods above, revise this sentence to be more concise:
I was so sleepy at my desk yesterday that I was yawning and yawning, so I decided I’d better drink a coffee or else I might fall asleep and nap right there at my desk!
Explain how you revised the sentence to be more concise.
Revised sentence: “I was so sleepy at my desk yesterday that I yawned repeatedly, so I decided to drink coffee to avoid napping right there.”
Explanation: I made the sentence more concise by eliminating repetitive phrases like “yawning and yawning” and “or else I might.” I combined similar ideas and used “to avoid” instead of “or else I might fall asleep and nap,” removing unnecessary words while maintaining the original meaning. This keeps the focus on the main idea while making it easier to read.